Reading "Vivid Eternity Blossoms On The Road". Wow, this thing is so painfully awful that llamabitchyo's Overexposed Overexposition Fairy starts looking good. *shudder* But... Must... Continue... Reading...!!! Seiji made it through the third chapter. After issuing my earlier challenge, I cannot do any less. I will prove that I am the greater masochist, and will finish through at least the fourth chapter!!
(I think this is the equivalent of a pissing contest for intellectual snobs. Or something like that.)
I have so much more respect for English teachers now. If I had to try and improve this author's writing, I don't know how I would even try to start going about it. *shudder*